Comments on: Roadie Poet: The Joke

By: Bobkat

Bobkat — Mon, 19 Jul 2010 16:57:20 +0000

There is so much in that poem! I love RP : )
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By: K

Mon, 19 Jul 2010 16:54:17 +0000

Ouch is right! I liked this a lot. It felt very real and in the moment.
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By: K

Mon, 19 Jul 2010 16:51:31 +0000

Ouch is right!
I liked this. It felt real.
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By: Dee

Dee — Mon, 19 Jul 2010 02:29:36 +0000

oh a blurter – ya been there too
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By: Thomma Lyn

Thomma Lyn — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 22:58:30 +0000

Wonderful, evocative. I love how you show RP’s feelings through carefully chosen detail.
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By: Thomma Lyn

Thomma Lyn — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 22:54:04 +0000

Wonderful — I love RP. You do a great job of showing his feelings through well-chosen detail.
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By: vivienne blake

vivienne blake — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 16:21:30 +0000

I like the pace of this, and I, too, want to hear the joke (vulgarity if often fun).

By: Janet

Janet — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 14:45:11 +0000

I like this – emotional and real. And I love the pocket stuff – gives us a really great sense of who he is without going the ‘tell’ route.
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By: Alice Audrey

Alice Audrey — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 04:39:58 +0000

Whooohooo Roadie!!!

Now I want to hear the joke.
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By: Julia Smith

Julia Smith — Sun, 18 Jul 2010 00:20:38 +0000

This is great:

‘I pull my hands away.
Try to jam them in
my back pockets.

There’s stuff in them.’

Foiled again!
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