Susan is the main fiction editor at West of Mars, indulging her inner red pen with a sense of humor. She’s been known to quote song lyrics, make fun of herself, and — most important — get into your characters’ skins and their story to help you bring out your best. From a 25-word flash fiction to a 100,000+ word novel, if it’s fiction, Susan lives to do it all. *


Once you’ve checked out the rates and the other particulars, drop Susan an e-mail if you’d like to move to the sample stage.


Please ask for rates!

Proofreading/copy editing (sticking straight to mechanics — are words used correctly? How’s the punctuation?)


Line editing (looking at your language and your sentences. Do they match the voice? How’s your word choice? Can you reword something for better meaning?) And the above.


Content editing (looking at plot, pacing, characterization, tension; etc. The big picture) And the above. It’s a bargain!


(We reserve the right to charge more for English as Second Language clients, as they often require more in-depth work and attention. We are willing to work with an author to fit a good quality edit into your budget, and we do offer a number of discounts to make sure you can afford us.)

A few more details


Payment in full must be made (PayPal cheerfully accepted, and yes, PayPal credit is accepted here) before work begins. No refunds after work has begun. You’ve paid not only for the work we’ll do, but our time.)


Samples of around 1200 words are highly encouraged.


All documents must be sent in a Word file, with double spacing throughout, first-line indents (or you’ll get a manuscript back with ’em!), and in preferably Times New Roman font. Courier induces nightmare-inducing flashbacks to dot matrix printers and electric typewriters.


If you are a Scrivener user, please let Susan know.




*Okay, the things Susan doesn’t do: fact-checking. Anything with an overly religious bent. Checking to make sure your characters in an erotic romance really do bend that way.